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IELTS Writing Task 1 band 8 sample: City population growth

A 174-word band 8 model answer. Read the question first and plan your own response before you look at the answer.

Task
Writing Task 1
Module
Academic
Type
Chart report
Length
174 words
Level
Band 8 model answer
The question
Line graph of the population in millions of Lagos, Dhaka, Manila and Turin at 1990, 2000, 2010 and 2020.

The line graph below shows the population (in millions) of four cities between 1990 and 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Band 8 model answer · 174 words

The line graph illustrates the population of four cities, Dhaka, Lagos, Manila and Turin, between 1990 and 2020, measured in millions. Overall, three of the cities grew substantially over the period, whereas Turin was the only one to decline, and then only marginally.

Dhaka recorded the most dramatic expansion, rising from 6.6 million to 21 million and more than tripling its population. It had overtaken Manila by 2000 and was the largest city by the end of the period. Lagos also grew threefold, from 4.8 million to 14.4 million, although it started as the smallest of the three growing cities. Manila, the largest in 1990 at 7.9 million, increased by six million to reach 13.9 million in 2020.

The rankings shifted considerably over the period. Lagos trailed Manila at every point until 2020, when it narrowly overtook it. The overall ordering in 2020 was therefore Dhaka, Lagos, Manila and Turin. Turin, by contrast, remained far smaller than the rest, slipping from 1 million to 0.85 million and staying almost flat between 2000 and 2010.

Why this scores band 8

The overview groups the cities by trend before giving any numbers, which shows control of the whole chart. The text uses a range of precise comparison structures (overtaken, trailed, more than tripling, threefold) and reports exact figures correctly. Each paragraph focuses on one feature, so the information is well organised and easy to follow.

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