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IELTS Writing Task 1 band 8 sample: Household spending breakdown

A 176-word band 8 model answer. Read the question first and plan your own response before you look at the answer.

Task
Writing Task 1
Module
Academic
Type
Chart report
Length
176 words
Level
Band 8 model answer
The question
Pie chart of average monthly household spending split into seven categories, from housing and utilities to other.

The pie chart below shows the average breakdown of monthly household spending in a mid-sized country in 2022.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Band 8 model answer · 176 words

The pie chart shows how average monthly household spending was divided among seven categories in a mid-sized country in 2022. Overall, housing and utilities accounted for the largest proportion by a considerable margin, while spending on essentials such as food and transport made up a large part of the remainder.

Housing and utilities was the largest single category at 34 per cent, some 13 percentage points higher than food and groceries at 21 per cent. Food and groceries came second, followed by transport at 14 per cent. Together, these three categories account for 69 per cent of total spending.

Healthcare and education each took a smaller share, at 9 and 8 per cent respectively, and together they account for 17 per cent of spending, slightly more than transport alone. Leisure and entertainment and the miscellaneous other category were the smallest, each at 7 per cent.

Taken as a whole, housing, food, transport and healthcare make up 78 per cent of spending, a considerably larger share than the remaining categories combined, which total just 22 per cent.

Why this scores band 8

The overview identifies the dominant category and the broad pattern before the detail begins. Figures are reported accurately, and the writer groups categories sensibly, such as adding up the top three and comparing combined totals, rather than listing every slice. Comparative language is varied (some 13 percentage points higher, slightly more than, a considerably larger share), which shows a flexible command of the vocabulary needed for this task.

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