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IELTS Writing Task 1 band 8 sample: University degree completion by field

A 171-word band 8 model answer. Read the question first and plan your own response before you look at the answer.

Task
Writing Task 1
Module
Academic
Type
Chart report
Length
171 words
Level
Band 8 model answer
The question
Grouped bar chart of male and female degree completion rates in Engineering, Health Sciences and Humanities in 2020.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of male and female students who completed a university degree in three fields of study in 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Band 8 model answer · 171 words

The bar chart compares the percentage of male and female students who completed a university degree in three fields of study, Engineering, Health Sciences and Humanities, in 2020. Overall, completion rates were high across all categories, and the gender gap varied considerably from one field to another.

Health Sciences recorded the highest completion rates for both groups. Female students led all groups at 82 per cent, while male students also reached their highest rate in this field at 74 per cent. Humanities followed a similar pattern, with women completing at 77 per cent compared with 69 per cent for men, an eight-point difference that matched the gap in Health Sciences.

Engineering was the only field in which male students outperformed female students, with 71 per cent of men completing a degree compared with 68 per cent of women. The margin was small, however, at just three percentage points. Engineering also recorded the lowest completion rate for women across the three fields. Overall, women outperformed men in two of the three fields.

Why this scores band 8

The overview highlights both the general level of achievement and the variation by field before any detail is given. The writer compares the two groups precisely, quoting differences in points and noting where they match, which demonstrates accurate and flexible comparison. Each paragraph covers a distinct feature of the chart without offering personal views, as the task requires.

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