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IELTS Writing Task 1 band 8 sample: Recommending a local gym

A 176-word band 8 model answer. Read the question first and plan your own response before you look at the answer.

Task
Writing Task 1
Module
General Training
Type
Letter
Length
176 words
Level
Band 8 model answer
The question

A friend has asked you to recommend a good place to exercise near where you live.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- recommend a gym or class you have personally used
- explain what you like about it
- mention anything they should know before joining (cost, schedule, or booking)

Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to include your own address.

Band 8 model answer · 176 words

Dear Jamie,

Thanks for asking about somewhere to exercise! I would definitely recommend the Riverside Community Pool, which is about ten minutes from my flat on foot. I have been going there for nearly two years, mainly for the early-morning swimming sessions.

What I love most is the atmosphere. The pool is never overcrowded, and the staff are unfailingly friendly; the lifeguards even remember my name now. There is also a separate aqua-aerobics class on Tuesday evenings, which is a brilliant workout for anyone who finds running hard on the joints.

Before you join, there are a few things you should know. A monthly membership costs £32, which is considerably cheaper than most private gyms, but you must book lane time online the day before, as the morning slots fill up quickly. The pool is closed on the first Sunday of every month for maintenance, so check the timetable before you plan a visit.

Let me know if you would like to come along one morning. I am happy to show you around.

Best wishes,

Ruth

Why this scores band 8

The letter covers all three bullet points: a recommendation from personal use, what the writer likes about it, and practical details on cost, booking and schedule. Those details are presented in a well-organised flow that a friend would find genuinely useful. Vocabulary such as 'unfailingly friendly', 'brilliant workout' and 'book lane time' is precise and natural, and the grammar varies between simple and complex sentences.

See every criterion in IELTS Writing band descriptors explained.

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